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 ==== Desiring Peace ====
-  * You feel that you are not the only one unhappy with how long the war has been dragging on. The ACE organisation seems to be pretty keen on the idea of some form of peace agreement, and really all they want is to have their planet back. It is a little unclearer what HGC want out of the war at this stage, but in the rank and file at least you feel your quiet agitation heard and shared.
+  * You feel that you are not the only one unhappy with how long the war has been dragging on. The ACE organisation seems to be pretty keen on the idea of some form of peace agreement, and really all they want is to have their planet back. It is a little less clear what HGC want out of the war at this stage, but in the rank and file at least you feel your quiet agitation is heard and shared.
 ==== Blind Devotion ====